this is the story of a girl,
so tranfixed and brainwashed,
she knew not of who she was.
she was shipped else where one day,
all because she thought for herself,
and now she cannot think for herself at all.
she lives in a place,
where she sees other people do stuff,
think anything,
say something,
and she cannot object to it,
she just follows suit.
and when she does open her mouth to speak,
not a word can be spoken.
she only speak words of what they say,
because she can no longer speak for herself.
this girl no longer tried anymore,
she let it all become part of her,
and now she is something different,
something she was not before.
this girl cannot think for herself,
and she is ok with that.
and when she goes home,
they all ask her what is wrong,
why has she changed so much,
the people that wanted her to in the first place,
and this girl just replies,
that they are crazy,
she has no idea what they are talking about.
and when she goes into her room,
and looks in that mirrior,
i am the one glaring back,
the menacing look of envy on my face,
the stab of jealousy in my eyes,
the pain of everything in my soul.
and still she is immune to it,
because she is gone,
transfixed and brainwashed
into nothing.
A contest entry
- Inspire me; Anything Goes by wolfcub.
450 points, ended April 16, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm in the mood for ANYTHING! by ForeverLastingComa.
550 points, ended April 25, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i feel like if that girl was..me..heh =/ nice write i enjoyed reading this much =) thanks for re entering and good luck =D
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i can see that you were paying attention to the rules but can you please putit in your author notes please thank you..
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foreverlastingcoma
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ooo... this is a strong write reecy! good yob! or job. you pick.
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