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Killerz

Chain up my heart,
So that we can never be apart.
Memories keep coming back into my head,
Remembering vaguely what I just said.
Just like any other wondering soul,
A price has to be made, and that's the toll.
Just like the pain deep inside,
Knowing that it was all just mine.
Feeling the presence of the dark omen,
Knowing 'tis was I it had chosen.

Holding on to my good luck charm,
Knowing it didn't work, I would feel harm.
They had said that it was a secret,
Forcing me to say that I would keep it.
I ventured along on this trail, long,
Knowing that I would never belong.
Walking on said path, that Friday came late,
The sky glimmering with it's eerie trait.
I was forced to bow down and give praise,
To it's undying oblivious blaze.
Just please, chain it up,
So that I, won't corrupt.

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The tittle does not go with the poem, but rather with the person it is for...

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  • Lionsloves Lair
    March 24, 2008
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    3 claps = 9 points

    Lionsloves Lair


  • Star Shine
    March 21, 2008
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    there is a very deep mood to this piece, it is full of apprehension to me and emotion. Well done.


  • ckwriter69
    March 19, 2008

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    I like this write it was very dark and had a mystical feeling to it. Good images and descriptions. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.


    • Luna Darling
      March 19, 2008
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      xD I am glad you liked it. ^-^ I do hope to have another 'work' up soon. Thankies!!

      Love, hope, and Dreams;
      Luna.


  • StarEyes
    March 17, 2008

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    Wow!! What aread this one is! This speaks volumes to me! and I am not sure why! Great job on this one!!

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