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Memories

Walking along the beach
    together hand in hand
Running side by each,
    barefoot in the sand
Laying on the rocks,
    at the edge of the shore
A place for lovers to go,
    I imagine we will score

Laying on a blanket,
    basking in the hot sun
Two young lovers,
    together we become one
The tenderness of your touch,
    the sweetness of your kiss
These are just a few things
    in actuality I truly miss

March 15 2008

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  • shysky
    July 14, 2008

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    This is incredibly sweet and touching. *smiles* having just been in that position myself only a week ago I remember the sun shining on my face and the ocean breeze whipping through my hair. The contentment of lying with a lover on the sandy shore and all the while still begging for more.


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    April 5, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie