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Infatuation

The sandstorm of love has raged and ceased, so too the rain -
Now I stand lonely as a dune in a desert plain.

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  • ms-cuddles
    September 9

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    I'm feeling this

    So little word say so much. This hits the heart as I believe it was written to. I guess you would have to really been in this situation to fully understand. I think it's great. It left my heart feeling empty,just like my last love ....... lol


  • Blooming Poet
    March 21, 2008

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    It doesn't feel finished, i just think its one verrrse and thats not enough in my opinion, if those 2 lines don't say enough. Great wording though amazing word choice.