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Nebulae

when we go away
we shall return as nebulae
in deeper dimensions of dreams

we shall breathe
our satisfied yearning
through the leaves
of evergreens

we shall bleed
our settled pain
in the red of poinsettia

we shall shed
our tranquil tears
in hyaline streams

when we go away
we shall return
to stay

galaxy of glory

myra

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Written February 10th, 2002

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  • myrataal silver member
    May 8, 2002
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    Thanks veelejot


  • May 4, 2002
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    excellent

    Veyr, very beautiful.

  • myrataal silver member
    February 11, 2002
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    Thanks, Poetic friends for visiting! I am sorry, h, I do not get it?

  • h2whoa
    February 11, 2002
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    P.S. There shouldn't be a 'was' in that third sentence!

  • h2whoa
    February 11, 2002
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    Terrific. Love the dreamy feel of it: tremendous. It was reminded me a little of my poem, Cosmic Traveller, but taken in a different direction.

  • yolanda
    February 10, 2002
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    This is so wonderful.

  • myrataal silver member
    February 10, 2002
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    Thanks slagman! Yip ... editing take some time ... but you beat the clock!


  • February 10, 2002
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    Nice.


  • February 10, 2002
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    OK, that's better.


  • February 10, 2002
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    Hi Myra! Looks like you'll have to edit to get the print to show. I'll be coming back later. Bye!

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