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If you only knew..

Something as simple as me hearing your name,
Put words in my head that I cant explain.
Back then, I wasn't really sure,
But now I see you are all I need and more.

I know we're only friends and it hurts so bad,
Because I know I'm a girl you don't wish to have.
My eyes glisten, I have butterflies flying,
Can you look at me, see how much I'm trying.

I sit and stare in your eyes, as you tell me again
Of how much you have fallen for my friend.
You leave me sad, yet I wish you'd stay,
In case I don't see you for the rest of the day.

You call me daily, asking how I am,
Inside I'm dying to say I want you as my man.
I'm not sure, exactly how long I can take,
Before my heart shatters of waiting so late.

I want to say I love you, for you to understand,
That I can no longer see us being just friends.
I'm scared to tell you baby, I don't want you to go,
So deep inside I hide my emotions so they wont show.

Every love song I hear, your name pops in my head,
So easy to feel it, so hard to be said.
Your everything I need in a man to be,
If only one day, you would love me.

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  • Andarael
    March 20, 2008

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    It is hard to tell someone how you feel about them especially when you think they don't return the sentiment. In the end it is better to just move on and find someone who does. Good luck in the contest.


  • Twilight Moon
    March 17, 2008
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    great poem well done


  • SchizoChic
    March 17, 2008

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    Wow, the intensity of this situation can blow up quickly and cause you to lose your friend at worst if things don't play out right. A very touchy situation indeed. you are in my thoughts.