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Licking Lips

Tasting the sin,
and feeling the burn,
I let you in,
Now its my turn

I'll take you fast,
on the roller coaster of your life,
I'm make an impression thats sure to last,
slicing in, like a knife

On my way,
i see your eyes,
And all the things I want to say,
are the wrong lies

kissing your lips,
i feel your knees start to shake
pushing your hips...
to mine, feeling you and that ache.

I need your kisses
and I crave them more,
biting your lips with wishes,
and pushing you to the floor.

I feel your teeth
as they start a teasing trail
trying to find, whats underneath
and then i hear, your sharp inhale.

Testing your will,
I tease and I taunt,
and I feel the chill,
of all the things you want to flaunt.

I feel your need
and i see the want
a reckless abandon with no heed,
never a stop.

Sweet as poison, your lips of fire,
you are my need,
and deepest desire,
biting my lip, and making it bleed.

A slow trail it traces,
as you drive me insane,
taking your toungue to the places,
I need you again.

I taste the blood and copper
all mixed with your tongue,
and I know I'm not a stopper,
I swear I'm not to young.

I feel the need in the air,
    and there is not need
to hesitate.


Whats the first emotion that hits you? Whats the most powerful emotion you feel?

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  • XxPan3xX
    June 27, 2008
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    naughty and beautiful!
    lol
    you should write music.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    March 18, 2008
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    sensuous desire....

    almost a dream like yearning for a secret love?
    LIke a secret note passed in class.
    You wrote this very boldly with good imagery.
    You can hear your strong desire mixed with a need
    to persuade your hope desired lover that you are
    not too young. You wrote lovely the sense of longing.
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen : )) well done!