If only you had cared
for my feelings before
our lives would be
blessed with love,
and my soul wouldn't
have to wait
till eternity in
the lonely skies above.
Author notes
user name - vibes of heart
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A contest entry
- Unrequited love by Lavender Butterfly.
460 points, ended March 17, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - SHORT POEMS PART 3 by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended April 5, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful poem. i can re;ate to this poem 100%. The pain displayed in only 7 lines is amazing. Great work, good luck in both of the contests. username plelase
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oooops! sorry - forgot to include the user name...hav done it now!
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i like the emotions in this poem you write very deep, it would have been nice to know that you are loved before it is too late, good luck in the contest and keep writing -Amy
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So beautifully sad and emotional... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.
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awwwwww so sad yes penned so well, a short but ever so strong write full of meaning. Great write
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