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The lonely road

On the lonely road I walk,
I stalk the one true being
who is to give me powers beyond imagining.
For as I search for it
I grow in power and
will become a god.
Those in my path will be destroyed
and will never see the afterlife.
I hunt the rarest of beings,
A god of life and a god of death.
For my soul to be at peace
I must kill them and hold their heads on high
For it is how I'll die.

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  • Onie and D'ark god of death and life this was well written i loved it sympol and sweet great work keep on writeing


  • jayyniecakes.
    February 23
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    put prompt number in authors notes please.


  • stavykm gold member
    February 16

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    Well written about the lonely road. I certainly hate being on this road myself.

    I must kill them and hold their heads on high
    For it is how I'll die.

    I can see you are an increadible poet with much deep thought. Thank you for commenting on my poem as well.

    Wishing You Many Blessings,
    Kelle Marie

  • HollyLouise
    February 12

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    nice thoughts here, well written, though short i like it a lot.
    I like the way it flows, even though it doesn't rhyme.

    Keep writing,
    Holly.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 12

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    Wonderful thoughts that you have
    penned here. Thanks a lot for sharing
    it with all of us here. Keep up the great work!




    Jeremy0826


  • Ftw lol
    December 29, 2008
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    Short but to the point of its beauty and creativity.


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    June 28, 2008
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    Greetings

  • yaong
    June 17, 2008

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    This is an amazing poem. I really liked it and I'm glad I had the opportunity to stumbl upon it. Great write.


  • tehzeeb
    May 13, 2008
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    this has some deep meaning to it...
    I bow to you god....
    LOL!


  • Jasmine Minx
    April 18, 2008
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    beatiful sad and evil..nice combinatio


  • Falcon SilverWolf
    April 17, 2008

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    I have read this before just never had time to comment I do like this poem it gives me the feeling of being confused


  • abuyi
    March 19, 2008
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    for its how i'll die- very provoking write my friend
    your task is not of a faint heart..

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