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She asked; "what's my worth"?

 

 

 

We want to openly discuss
the ruckus about women
having the same opportunity as men ,
then, we will go a step or two further
with relished moments of accomplishment
in a world that tends to fend off
the abilities of me and my sisters,
multi-tasking fluently
in the midst of raising children,
and giving our husband men
their fair share...

Our talents often go unseen
and under-appreciated.
Fairness fails when women get 77¢
to his dollar and he gets the promotion,
after she teaches him everything he knows.
Hats off to the mother of three
who works 9 hours a day,
cooks dinner, cleans house,
helps with homework,

bathes boisterous kids,
reads bedtime stories,

makes next-day lunches
and tries to catch her breath ...
while listening patiently
as her husband drones on
about his hard day at work.
And yet, women somehow find
the determination
to get up each day…
and start all over again.

'Cause we're in it to win it
in spite of the odds.
The winning cards are ours,
and always have been.
It's an outrageous sin

the way we are considered second class.
But it's okay-- because we know we're first,
and when you get right down to it;
what other species of human
could do it like we do it?
It's in our biochemical make up
to be able to answer the phone,
while loading the dryer,
and feeding the baby,
to stop in the middle of an intimate moment,
change a diaper, let the cat out,
return to the love making-scene,
and continue right where we left off,
not missing a stroke of sensuality...
Maybe someday the men of the world
will see our worth,
and grant us three wishes
for doing the dishes,
give us an adequate pay,
for working inside,
and outside of the home everyday.

But even if they remain blind
to the value of our minds,
and the strength of our bodies,
we will stand tall like redwoods
stretching skyward
with the branches of our ancestors,
nurturing the seeds of future generations.
For our worth lies
not in the hands of another,
but is woven into the fabric of our being,
in the deepest parts of our spirit
where courage, determination, and hope dwell.
We are mothers, daughters,
sisters, friends, warriors.
We are women.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Another great pleasure for me is being able to work with a woman that has the same thought pattern as I. We are in the same generation, and have come into our own, knowing without a doubt that this is our season.

It is a blessings to know you Janice and working with you on this piece was a breeze.






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  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 14

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    What a beautiful write dear Renee'! Being a woman myself, you raise us up to new hopes and new horizons while you share our worth in all situations. This is from your heart to us all, and I enjoyed every word. I enjoy your page as well as you inform me more about Black America and these people that I dearly love!..Bravo!


  • Mad Moon silver member
    July 10

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    YEAH!!

    My goodness, girlfriend! This is so eloquently written, and so full of truth. You always use such rich language, too. "...we will stand like redwoods stretching skyward...." LOVE this metaphor!!

    I will come back to this poem often, if for nothing else but to remind myself of my own worth. I so often "surrender,"....NO MORE! Thanks you so very much for this gem, dear one. Bookmarking this one for sure!

    I SOOOOO love you my Sister/Angel/Friend!

  • tay mckay
    July 10
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    great

    its really good...i like the ending where it says we are.. its good

  • Night Hope gold member
    July 10
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  • Catch33
    July 10

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    I like this poem a lot. I'm also a man-hater. I just think there is moral and ethical disparity between men and women. The fact that my father is a bum who gives bad advice doesn't improve my outlook.
  • Hats off to you, sister. :]

  • An interesting and thoughtful piece which raises a key issue in todays society..I found it thought provoking but meangingful Wonderful write.


  • Nicolette gold member
    July 9

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    I will say AMEN, sisters to this poem before I go to bed, Renee. You've said it all here. I hope more men than women read this...and understand.

    ~ Nicolette

  • emma7386
    July 9
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    Wow! Love this, my favourite part is:
    Hats off to the mother of three
    who works 9 hours a day,
    cooks dinner, cleans house,
    helps with homework,
    bathes boisterous kids,
    reads bedtime stories,
    makes next-day lunches
    and tries to catch her breath ... it's overwhelming, breathtaking, to a man impossible. A great write!!

  • Preach It Sister!

    I am one of those guys that isn't this way and honestly I don't know what I'd do or who I'd become if it wasn't for my mother. This is such an anthem and I endorse it's truths. The part that stuck out to me the most, just b/c of the truth it carries is

    "Hats off to the mother of three
    who works 9 hours a day,
    cooks dinner, cleans house,
    helps with homework,

    bathes boisterous kids,
    reads bedtime stories,

    makes next-day lunches
    and tries to catch her breath ...
    while listening patiently
    as her husband drones on
    about his hard day at work"

  • Nice job ladies, you two meshed very nicely together. Sounds like one voice.
    This poem is a little hard for me to relate to, I guess since I'm 20 and aren't from the same generation you two are, or because I have a different lifestyle also. Just the mentality of feeling like you have to do all of this shit for a man is pretty sad to me. You should make your man help out, share the housework 50/50 so you can have more time pursuing your own dreams. Yep, all my 21st century opinions.
    The question mark in the title should go inside the quotations, since the dialogue is a question. If you yourself were questioning a quote like "What did she mean when she said 'I'm worth 77 cents'"? The question mark goes outside.
    There’s an extra space before the comma in the first stanza you might want to fix and I’d suggest taking another look at all of the ellipses. I think most of them could be removed; well personally I’m not a fan of them in the first place so I’m a little biased here, but I think some of them are hindering the flow and just causing clutter, like the first one. It’s unneeded because creating a new stanza already gives you a natural pause. If you like the second one, I think you should fix the extra space in it before the ellipses.
    I enjoyed reading this. It gave me a different outlook on our society about something I hardly think about. It’s a huge shame that women had/have to work so hard to be seen as equals to men. I am still shocked that women had to fight for their right to vote. I think things today are whole lot better but certainly not perfect. You two are very right, women are the elite class, they’re superheroes.
    -Kevin

  • HeyTeach !!!

    This is right up there alongside, "Ain't I a woman?"
    All God's mercies and virtues are called after women's names, ain't that telling you something?

    Beautifully done, Renee!

    John-LV Nevada

  • Anannya
    July 9

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    this poem is really an outstanding piece which makes an women feel proud of herself. really this poem stands for women empowerment and the precious power that the almighty have given to every women in the earth.
    really i loved the way u expressed all these things in ur poem and the way u made each and every women special.
    the wordings and every part of the poem cries out what a women is and how unique is a women.


  • Catressa gold member
    June 21
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  • Catressa gold member
    June 21

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    awesome

    I love reading things like this.. and knowing that there are others out there that feel this way..

    Have I not done my best by you that is a constant thought that roams through my head for my family and No I am not selfish, but grant me a little grace and dignity somehow.

    I love you my sister Renee.

    And your collaborator I honestly could not tell who wrote what which is the true talent in this write..

    BRAVO!! Let me offer my simple applause and words but tell you this was a very great read!

    All the best,
    Catressa

  • "It's a outrageous sin" I think a should be an?

    This is simply beautiful. The words really reach out to women who feel the same way. Even if the world doesnt understand, we know all we do, and I think in this time, that has to be enough to keep us going. The world wouldnt run without mothers. =)

    I like this best:

    "we will stand tall like redwoods
    stretching skyward
    with the branches of our ancestors,
    nurturing the seeds of future generations."

    rooted on a foundation of the past, expanding our reach, further and further upward.

    Love it! =)

    Criss

  • I don't think that a collaboration that uplifts, empowers and tells it like it is at the same time could have come at a better time or from better poets than the two of you. Nor do I think that I could've passed this piece up without at least saying a few words about us--women, the stronger half of the human race.

    I say "the stronger half" because when you add up domestic work, child rearing, educating self & community, labor outside of the home, spirituality and resilience, it truly appears that we shoulder a greater burden for unequal glory, but we rarely complain (unlike some of the men I know). Amd those among us who can't take it anymore band together and go on crusade until we get our point across. This poem is a testament to the strength and willpower of all women, while naming but a few of woman's attributes.

    It seems that gender equality, in this life, will be an uphill battle from here to next eternity, but know of a certainty that eventually, there will be no more lines, and men of any age, any race, any status, will see eye-to-eye with us.

    Although sometimes one has to wonder...

    Stunning poem!



    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora (little sister)


  • twinzy001
    May 13
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    hello sweet renee


  • AsIThink
    May 5

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    Hmmmmm...

    This is an incredible collaboration; penetrating.... The synergy is wonderful. I think life has it's well-documented evidence of duality, plurality and popularity...Yeah, it's popular--it seems--for so many of us to drive home the finer points of our differences. Why? Too many reasons to mention here. And still, the differences between the sexes has not gone away since, well "the beginning...?" Women are honored and then discarded. Honored. Discarded. Used up; appreciated for the passion, wisdom, patience; drive and multi-tasking and these previous traits appear to be 'hard-wired' to her (soul?). We are not better--we are different: women and men (it seems like our species has 'gender-value' amnesia...) Thank you for this provoking write.

  • peterkk
    March 30

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    Wonderful poem, very expressive of a problem in society which is treated to lightly by most. Although it has to be said that some of the ideas contained within are sweeping statements, that are not true. Men do appreciate Women, I sure do, i think it is a misjudgment to treat all men, and all women as one entity. Even looking at writers from the 1800s they give womena huge amount of respect, Oscar Wilde in particular in his plays, "the ideal husband" and "A woman of no importance". It canlt be argued though that you make a fantastic poetic argument, a pleasure to read, and thought provoking.

  • One ofthe best poems you HAVE EVER written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • WoW, I guess you said it all,
    and you have done an outstanding job.
    You have just made me feel even more proud to be a woman.
    After reading your words, I now feel as if I could move mountains.
    Women really do, do alot in one day, now don't we?
    I truly think we really are what makes the world go around.
    I hope a lot of men would read this n=and realize just how wonderful we truly are.
    I am more than proud of the two of you for writing such a meaningful piece of poetry.
    You both done an remarkable job.
    You should send a copy to all the men in the world LoL.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce

    . Rewarded 8

  • well I guess the reason they beat us to the jobs is cos their mums raise them to be winners!

  • This is a great poem.


  • Piccola gold member
    March 19

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    this was a great pleasure to read. I don't work outside of the home and so I kind of feel 2nd class, as if I don't measure up. I don't bring home the bacon, just fry it up in the pan. I did work at one time but not enough to even get SSI This is a fine tribute to women though.

  • HaleighGrace
    March 19
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    this is amazing--amazing


  • Swangrnv
    March 18
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    OUTSTANDING WORK YOU TWO!!

    I RISE UP AND APPLAUD YOU BOTH, LOUDLY! I LOVED EVERY SINGLE WORD.By the way if either of you want an inside look on how I personally feel about your value as women? read my piece, true beauty of a woman and you might find out not all men think less of you. know I don't!


  • Warrior-Eagle
    March 17
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    And yet, women somehow find
    the determination
    to get up each day…
    and start all over again.

    I loved that.
    That just did it.
    You two Mom & Aunt did a fantastic job!
    You should work together more often
    This was simply amazing, very truthful
    AND thought provoking

    ..Simply Me♥


  • secberm
    March 17

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    Actually, I'd have to agree with John. One of the sisters (who I love at my old organization) admitted that she beat out those who applied for her position because she was Black and a woman. It was a 'good 'ol boy' organization that held many contracts with Uncy Sam. And as you know most governmental contractors have to meet certain criterias.

    NOT saying she shouldn't have been there. Nope. Not saying that at all. As a matter of fact, she was 1 out of 8 managers. The other 7 were white men. Out of those 7, 5 of them continuously screwed up other accounts. 1 manager trained them all (a fair white man). All the crap accounts were given to her. She'd clean them up and move on.

    And she was on the low end of that pay scale. If that postion paid 95-135 K. She was making 100 while the others earned (or took home) damn near the max. The only one who maxed was the one who trained (who happened to be MY boss.)

    He trained and she cleaned up the messes. One.

    Dez


  • Peteskid gold member
    March 17
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    equality was always a more distant star for women, and still is...there is nothing about which i feel stronger than the need for equality for women, and so this poetry strikes a chord here; two strong women, raising an even stronger voice joining hands to say a poetic amen... a[wo]men. Renee, JB ...wonderful work here...PK


  • johnswails
    March 17

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    There is definitely an unfairness among the salaries, appreciations, and recognition of women in America, especially African-American women.

    Having said that I could not disagree more with

    "giving our husband men
    their fair share..."

    Being one of the UNEMPLOYED husbands I can assure we are all not getting our fair share. When I was working my salary was lower than my white peers. I use the word peer loosely since I trained the majority of my supervisors. So I assure you this unequal pay and treatment falls down hill and increases accordingly. Since women and African-American women in particular fall at the very bottom, they catch the largest gap in salary difference but that does not in any way mean the African-American men who may be higher on the totem pole are getting what they are due either.

    I do have a question though. One of the largest impacts on my income through my career has not been the salary but the lack of financial security. While my salary may have been larger than my sisters, I was less likely to be kept on at the company. Perhaps the Euro-American management felt less threatened by the African-American women but whatever the motive, the African-American men are more likely to be offered contract positions with limited employment time and more likely to be let go during cutbacks than the women. As a result my overall income at the end of a year averages less than that of my wife.

    Just a self-life observation. Not sure who else has noticed this. All in all it is my opinion inequality is more than flourishing in this country and its impact is felt in various ways across various cultures and their genders. In fact the only thing equal about inequality is that it is an equal opportunity persecutor.

    One Love,

    John

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