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Innocence

Through countless days of drama, lies and deceit,
I stare at the pool of tears around my feet.

The stress and fear is too much for me to take,
I feel that any more will cause me to snap and to break.

The lies i deem are just too much to bear,
I can barely contain myself as i pull at my hair.

I cry and shake and scream into the night,
No longer can i keep putting up this God-damned fight.

I begin to give in as the chaos take a hold,
As more of this drama begins to unfold.

My mind starts to collapse and break down inside,
Because no more can my innocence be justified.

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the second one i wrote in da middle of the biology exam.lol

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  • xhellovee
    May 17

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    Gosh, I'm a sucker for rhyming poems.

    "I begin to give in as the chaos take a hold,
    As more of this drama begins to unfold."
    My favorite line !
  • wonderful

    So I randomly came across your site and I'm glad I did! I can really relate to your poetry

    There is a lot of emotion in this and it brings the poem to life. I could definitely feel the anger and pain radiating off each line.

    Beautiful job! Keep up the great work


  • EmmaLuLu
    April 16

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    very good poem!!u write very well!!!! i love the way u described the pain. emh..brill check out my poems x
  • wow

    nice write , i like lines 3 and four and 9 and 10 as well, like the rhyme scheme


  • crazZze kay
    March 19

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    grrrr lol

    this is a awesome poem itz almost explaining how i feel at the moment. well i loved it


  • Broken Bambi
    March 17

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    lol boilogy exams are so inspiring

    I love this, I hate you, your so much better than me
    nah love you really

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