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Prometheus found


If you ever told me
what you sought,
I had forgot
then one day
I saw your face
a passerby
you brought back grace
into my life
when I had sunk
into despair.

You had once said you wanted
me to make ye feel something;

You had once written
you wanted to think something,
and then I felt like a god.

I took this space for you
so I could make you a world.

You wrote you wanted me
to leave an impression on ya,
that you won't want to forget.
When I thought I was dying,
you, though mortal, gave me new life.


The living person returns the gift
the dying one accepts it.
The mortal soul instills a grin
the everlasting search for wisdom.

Here I am
& here I go
do you want to come
& see the show?

Author notes

Freely write, right?

Here I go, ready or not.

Laisser les bon temps rouler! Let the good times role, cousin!

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  • creationsfromheart
    March 17, 2008

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    it is 50-55 words not lines,for this contest
    But i like this it is a good write and quickly done, I am sorry it is to many words for this contest.