no reflection to see
only a broken mirror
cracked from the lies
thrown aside
she cries,
she cannot see the truth
it is a broken reflection
of her young youth
darkness forever lurks
seeing nothing but sorrow
she drowns them with perks
afraid she wont see tomorrow
the mirror is broken
shattered through deceit
and words unspoken
never to be fixed
never to be complete
Author notes
i wrote this in school its not the best considering it was quick, so the teacher couldnt see me. hope u like it
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its not my best it was a quick thing in school, what do u think??
Comments
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Amazing Imagery is the first thing I really enjoyed about this poem. It is also something I can relate to.
great work -
good job
wow this is really good. my fav part is the last where is says about "the mirror is broken
shattered through deceit
and words unspoken
never to be fixed
never to be complete"
its really powerful
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I like the way you used the words, it was unique, creative and wonderful. The rhyming could have been a little more frequent but all in all, Great Poem! It said so much with so little words.
Thanks for entering!
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Yes... it's a good poem... to me! I just don't understand what is meant by "perks" in this poem, other than that it's fine.
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this is a really great poem, you have such a way with words. Great write
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this is great
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I really do like this
I liked everything you said (spoke) in this poem! Especially..Darkness forever lurks,seeing nothing but sorrow, she drowns them w/ perks, afraid she won't see tomorrow. Fantastic. My one suggestion is the last line. Split it Never to be fixed
never to be complete....very nice
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this is really good for a quick write ... ...
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thank you
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Your prompt is.....
a broken mirror
Good Luck!
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