I looked out my bathroom window
to see the deep golden sun of springtime
reappear for the first time this year
God spoke to me through the soothing rays
of warm gold cascading through the window,
"Don't leave the seat up." He said.
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lol. That ending was hilarious. Good advice, though. It's always best to put the toilet seat down.
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LOL you had me there for a minute! hehehe
ALWAYS put the toilet seat down!!
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ha ha...thank you
love, lane
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Interesting piece. Indeed put the seat down, always polite. Yet for some reason, I feel God would have something better to say...
Pic i loved.
Great job,
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I laughed so much that I fell of my chair! This poem is so much fun, I must admit I was sceptic in the start since the poem was so short and you spoke about god but I must say the end was hilarious! I didnt expect that at all!
Great written poem! Keep up the amazingly fun writing!
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This is just to cute,
very beautiful and funny.
What a joy to read.
I really like this piece
Loveandblessings2u & yours a;ways
Joyce
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Marvelous!
A brilliantly humorous and Majestic piece.
The photo itself is just breathtaking.
You're clever positioning of words has
made this a treasure. Great writing!
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Okay.
Oh I think God can pretty much put the seat down if he wants to. But I liked the graphic and a little something to smile about. -
I love it...It is very funny!
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HAHAHAHA thanks for the laugh. This was a really sweet poem at the beginning and the end was so unexpected Nice write
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Sweet deal
hahaha, nice. at first...awwww what a cute poem...and then BAM! totally hilarious. nice work. Keep it up.
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This poem was so soothing... but the end that was sure funny I liked that a lot. Great job!
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LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOT ME!
you are not right! Lovely and vivid images!
Michelle
still laughing
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I love this poem! It beautifully describes nature, and also in a more spiritual sense. I love how you illustrate the sun as something sacred. In Judaism, everything is holy or about to become holy. I like that idea. There's almost nothing more relaxing than watching a beautiful sunset in slow motion.
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haha Great poem. I lol'd.
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lol this is sweet and comical not what i had thought very talented...keep writting.
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This is sound advice. You got to be careful of those toilet seats. Anyone can just fall in. Keep on writing.
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Just when I was easing into the scene, you flushed it!! Very funny, you rat!
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Warm and sunny reminder of 'Light'!
Good to know His Guidance is available whenever He is remembered.
And He will always inform us on our own level, which we can understand!
I enjoyed the simplicity and I wish I had such a view of the sea, from my window! Still there are always many ways of remembering the True Friend. I liked such sentiment.
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I like how Gods clear and giving light is transformed into a wise voice saing to put the seat down. Very evry funni. I rather enjoyed it.
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If there was a God she would know that if you have a small son you always leave the seat up or it gets wet!!!
For small son read any man under 90!
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Sort of a shocker, I liked the punch line. Nice job.
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Such a cute poem you have penned here. Think that is what a wife/girlfriend/daughter usually says. LOL
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This is so beautiful then when I got to the last line I realized that God is a woman. Bravo!
Love.
Amera♥
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That would explain a lot, wouldn't it!
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