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wtf!!

We send our soliders overseas right? and yet almost no one give them the recognization they deserve and earn. why when our men and women come home are they not all welcomed with open arms and hearts? many come home to empty airports,empty cars, empty homes and hearts. take the time to try and imagine what they go trough and see on a daily basis over there. men being shot, blown to pieces, woman, childern, senior citizens...all being killed so someone higher in power can feel good about themselves, and the decisions they make.

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not a poem. more a rant that i needed to get out there

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  • robert bolin
    November 17, 2008

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    I agree that our soldiers are being let down by so many when they are out there fighting for our freedom, democracy is a cost that only the rich control and the poor can only bare the scars left behind, A very powerful write.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 13, 2008

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    Your words are so true here and something
    that we all need to consider in our daily
    lives. I love the way that you expressed
    yourself in this piece. Well done and
    thanks a lot for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • inhisimage
    May 16, 2008

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    this is a great write. i like it alot. This write is full of great emotion. Alot of people I know re involved over seas. I go to a military school and so I know lots of people over theere. Well I dont go to that school anymore, now I go to an governors school for the arts and tech, but still. We are all a part of this weither we realize or not, and our troops need our love in support cause we are what modivates them to fight for our country to begin with. the least we can do is be there for them wen they come home after risking their lives for us


  • lovemedeath
    April 29, 2008
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    nice i liked it!!


  • Austere
    April 18, 2008
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    I get what you mean about coming home to emptiness. It pisses me off how people are towards our troops. I was walking home from school today and walked past a group of old people holding signs against the war and I almost yelled "SEMPER FI", or "1 2 3 4... UNITED STATES MARINE CORPS"


  • kittyz
    April 11, 2008

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    good

    its good to let this stuff out. it feels good. i may not agree entirely but i can see the depth and sincerity of this write.


  • ItsUrHomeboy
    March 25, 2008

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    nice

    I like the emotion and compassion you expressed here , very wonderful and moving write. I love the honest feelings and truths here as well , I'll be back to read more for sure. Great writing!!!

  • Mysterioso
    March 18, 2008

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    I love this. I've got reletives I can't talk to anymore cause they are so anti- everything I'd have to kick there asses. It really irks me how taken advantage of we really are. Thank you for righting this, I can add you to the list of people I'm serving for. As you can imagine, it's a pretty short list.
    Semper Fidelis


  • Beatles Girl
    March 18, 2008

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    I agree!!! I have four friends and a brother overseas right now, and it makes me so sick to hear people abuse them.


  • hijuso
    March 18, 2008

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    This is damn straight, some people even curse them
    like they're evil. It's not right 'n' not fair.
    Even the idiots who ordered them there don't say thanks, which really takes the piss.
    Great writing, now take it to your mayor. Demand parades, bet you don't get them because there's no money.
    Just say to the people in charge, if we didn't go to war then we'd have the money & more people alive.
    As you can tell, I strongly agree with your writing.


  • xkadiex
    March 17, 2008

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    i say this sota stuff to ppl al the time and it really makes me made, nice to know u think the same kinda

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