Secrets held within the mind
The tongue remains controlled.
The truth is always there to find
In what the eyes do hold.
The eyes are windows to the soul.
Revealing thoughts untold.
Look there when the truth is your goal
And the facts will soon unfold.
Secrets hide in plain sight
Just waiting to be told.
Try to hide it as you might.
Your eyes, the truth, do hold.
A contest entry
- The 0 to 100 Contest! by Peachy.
600 points, ended April 4, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love this poem, it had such a beautifully eloquent flow that the rhyming seemed second nature rather than a forced result of this contest. I truly loved the content, and the message of this poem and really hope you do well. Great job and good luck.
Hugs and Kisses,
Tiphanie -
I loved this!
This was truly excellent! It said so much and such good things, it was really good! I liked the way it rhymed, it had a good feel/flow to it.
Good Luck in the Contest!
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Your prompt is.....
What the eyes hold.
If you don't get this just ask me
Good Luck!
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