Vain beats your heart
Rejection your blood
toungues speak deciet
[liar]
Love in mind
treasuring words
my own reality
[fairytales death]
passing days
abandonment's appearance
tears behind blindness
[believing love].
Author notes
prompt:unrequitted love
30words or less.
pic credit:By anomaliya on Flickr
A contest entry
- Unrequited love by Lavender Butterfly.
460 points, ended March 17, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Painful Side Of Love by Blooming Poet.
575 points, ended March 28, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sad. [] those work wonders here. love this part, its very well said:
Vain beats your heart
Rejection your blood
toungues speak deciet
[liar]
I know the feeling
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Deeply creative and intensely gripping... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.
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Oh precious...you've penned something special here. You have such a perceptive heart dear.
Love and peace,
mj.
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ohhh it's so sad, i sure hope to be able to read more of your poetry
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