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Exhale

Keep it down.

All the feelings inside.

Close your eyes.

Lose yourself in the reality of your mind.

Take a breath, then take another.

When nothing's left.

But you, you'll go on.

In dreams of tomorrow.

Forgetting yesterday

Having no regrets.

Waiting.

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  • BrownEyedGirl575
    September 29

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    I really liked this, you are very talented too! I can relate here, to me it speaks of living one day at a time when life has thrown a lousy curve ball your way, and getting through the hard times, like Jesus said, "This too shall pass," and that is what this brings to my mind. I like the hopefulness here. Great writing!
    Hugs,
    Amy


  • Lanivitybeauty
    September 28
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    Thank you all.


  • Ellis gold member
    November 14, 2008
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    Good Writing

    You have many friends here!


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    May 6, 2008
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    You wrote this really well....

    it's so true too...we all have to remember to
    INHALE AND EXHALE....
    because holding the breath...only makes everything
    WORSE...and we may unknowingly double our pain,
    or make weary decisions.

    When I am faced in a challenge that rocks me...
    i remind myself...okay stop...now breathe damn you
    breathe!
    giggle.
    ears/Seattle GREAT POEM!


  • CountryCousin
    March 27, 2008

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    I tell my.

    I tell my little lady that when it gets bad for her. I mean the pain to take a deep breath and another until she can go on. So you are right the trick is to have no regrets.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 27, 2008

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    Forever moving forward, as we do. Hope is a wonderful thing, without it well we would be lost. A superbly penned piece


  • Transcend All
    March 25, 2008
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    Transcend All

    Something about this piece, the title coupled with your expressions make for a nice spot to return. Every time I see the title in our list I come back to it. Exhale.....whoooooooo!

    Namaste'

  • Transcend All
    March 20, 2008

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    Transcend All

    Tomorrow , that thing were wish for - that it be better than today, this moment. Keep it down...all the feelings inside...close yours eyes...Lose yourself in the reality of your mind! WOW, I quoted this because the words rang so very true. Has I typed it out I felt such understanding, such compassion for you. I thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.

    Namaste'
    MarcieR.


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    March 19, 2008

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    Wow, yes - always waiting - for that better tomorrow. We should carry no regrets. We do keep breathing, and go on carrying dreams of tomorrow. This was very nice. Sad too, especially the part;

    "Take a breath, then take another.

    When nothing's left. "

    That is what we do - take another breath even when there is nothing left - then, we continue on.

    Thank you for sharing! Blessings.


  • tawk gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    There is always tomorrow!! Without hope where would we all be? What an amazing and very thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem with us all Theresa

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