They play in brassy tones
collecting us all
upon a perfect existence
The sound
of eternal peace
lingers after the night sleeps
and strangers walk home
with a song in their thoughts
remembering ~
black mouths blew them to sway
and white feet applauded harmony
Author notes
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A contest entry
- 10/10/10 Quickie Word Prompt by lostangel07.
800 points, ended March 17, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oh wow mummy this is so brilliantly written with such a depth you have done amazingly with the prompt. congrats on the gold
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Excellent. Excatly what I was thinking and looking for. Good job.
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