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Warning Label



I scribbled,
"I love you's"
on stars.

Handed you my
heart in a box
of "forever's".

Stamped, "fragile,
handle with care".

I guess you forgot
to read the warning
label.

Author notes

Unrequited love!

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  • Arizona Sunset
    March 20, 2008

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    yes sometimes we do forget the warning labels...beautifully done! congrat on the HM


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 17, 2008

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    Truly clever and immensely engaging... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.


  • BellaD
    March 17, 2008
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    I love the last stanza! Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.