Head hanging down
in subliminal efforts
distinguishing
patterns
~the sunrise
or sunset~
all the same.
Her mirage ultimatum
....just collapsed yesterday
sadly her mind could'nt let her fly.
Author notes
Mirage is like a fake illusion! Here it is the illusions of a girl that she is living in and ultimatum is the end of it! Could be for love hopes pain and desire!!!
A contest entry
- 10/10/10 Quickie Word Prompt by lostangel07.
800 points, ended March 17, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful. Well written and a very enjoyable piece. I particulary like the way you have interpreted the prompt. Good job and good luck.
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thanks
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