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The time of freesias

Today it rises
from an old vase
(surprised, I deeply inhale, closing my eyes)
seated on the old wooden bench,
full of colors
full of flowers.
Sudden, a silent guest
flying on its invisible sails
framing me
with sweet memories
and my heart quivers
like its white petals.

Author notes

Author of this amazing picture is: Ann Cameron
Prompt:
What is the bliss of solitude to you?
Is there any bliss in solitude?

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    March 29, 2008

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    Very beautiful writing. I got lost in this. It is indeed, deep. I agree with Pam, there is a certain 'peace' to this write. Amazing how the power of words can make people feel emotions.

    All the best
    Wayne Leon
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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    Such an amazing presentation. Wonderfully soft and visual. Truly a breathtaking verse.

    A pleasure to find such beauty in my contest. I enjoyed this very much. You have left me feeling quite peaceful. Thank you. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • Room without doors gold member
    March 20, 2008

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    Outstanding

    I liked how you painted a picture of solitude without even mentioning it - using imagery to create texture and tone. I thought the poem was emotional with some incredible imagery. Best of luck in the contest.


  • PersephoneInWinter
    March 18, 2008

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    i like your alliteration with the letter "f" i really like the feel that it gives.
    i think that the part about your heart quivering is brilliant because it goes with the picture so well. great write and good luck in the contest!


  • Sandal
    March 18, 2008

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    We are never alone, even when solitary. Your poem evokes the return of a memory by scent on a breeze. Beautiful words for the picture.


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    SO, SO BEAUTIFUL!!!

    I have always found a certain peace, even joy in solitude at times. As an only child I had to find happiness and peace in being alone. I now consider myself so lucky to have had this and to learn by it. When one is alone they see so much more beauty in the world around them.


  • tara wilson gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    this is a gentle poem - and such a beautiful moment of solitary bliss, I love this one, beautiful poem..


  • Wandika gold member
    March 17, 2008
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    Beautiful

    I love the quiet moments especially in the garden.

    Jim


  • Nicolette gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    Beautiful, soulful, serene poetry... even in solitude there is beauty and so often it is these quiet little moments, breathing the fragrance of flowers, of freesias that help us stay sane and alive. Lovely one - you know how much I love flowers in poetry!!

    ~ Nicolette

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