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Painful love






Amazement trickes down
  amber gowns
    tickling survival...
 

...question marks?




Cut on wrist
  unforced act of passion
  wipes
feeding on whip lashes
   

Slowly, pain subsides






Did you feel my love hurting?







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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 17, 2008

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    This is deeply gripping and intensely compelling. Hung off every words here... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    March 17, 2008

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    This piece was deep and beautiful. I got lost in the words. Very very good indeed. Well done.

    Love
    Wayne Leon

  • Papagallo
    March 17, 2008

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    Love at times can indeed be painful. These words are most beautiful in the pain of love you so well penned.