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Keepsake Bouquet

i cherish petals of affection
tenderly capturing it
in a potpourri of dreams

colourful declarations of love
trimmed with the ribbons
of devotion

my dainty pansies
~ slowly turning
into antique pearls ~
line sweet rememberance


cup your hands:

my tears
are not destined
for this for ever thirsty Earth

an enchanted melody
evaporates from your fingertips ~
the Essence of Eternity

myra

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Written February 10th, 2002

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  • Cinara
    February 10, 2002
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    A very lovely poem, indeed, filled with velvet phrases


  • February 10, 2002
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    im not sure how this works what is that thing down there. that chart. I dont think I want to even try that. this is a very nice poem Im not used to happy things so they kind of bug me but this one wasnt bad.

  • XxnecovesperxX
    February 10, 2002
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    i love the first verse..i cherish petals of affection
    tenderly capturing it
    in a potpourri of dreams


  • Mad Moon silver member
    February 10, 2002
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    Stunning! Absolutely beautiful. Vivid images and emotion-packed. Excellent write!


  • dianes
    February 10, 2002
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    simply lovely.......ty

  • aiwaz
    February 10, 2002
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    i think i could recognize yr work, unsigned, and ive barely scratched the surface....lovely as always

  • Pleasure
    February 10, 2002
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    Nice

  • yolanda
    February 10, 2002
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    Vivid. The sweet essence of Nature and its glory as beheld
    through the eyes of the human eye. Very spiritual.


  • myrataal silver member
    February 10, 2002
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    We do it together, gecko, all of us ... thank you.


  • myrataal silver member
    February 10, 2002
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    Thank you, slag, I find that spiritual essence in your poetry too.


  • gecko
    February 10, 2002
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    beautiful poetry Myra that could be viewed in so many interpretations. Loved it


  • February 10, 2002
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    A happy poem, myra, with a glimspe into spiritual essence.


  • myrataal silver member
    February 10, 2002
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    Thanks again, Andy! There's a reader for every poem, and vice versa.


  • Einstein on Crack
    February 10, 2002
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    This is truly beautiful ..... such expression is awesome .... Your words are filled with such wonderful imagery .... Andy

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