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Rain Drops

A
drop falls
followed by
another drop
rain strikes the pavement
(pitter pat, pitter pat)
like a snare drum's rhythmic beat
setting a tempo for the day
matching the pulse of mother nature
tension follows the rain down the storm drain

A contest entry

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  • Perception
    March 25

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    I really like this.. the rain drops and the rhythmic beat... Good thought... Very interesting form, and beautifully written

  • Kelli Marie
    March 22

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    A nicely written etheree. It would be a lot better if you could have made it a cleaner triangle, still a nice entry.
    Kelli