I gathered stars from nights of blue moons,
laying silver carpets for you.
You trampled them, walking past me;
I roll in your dust, shreds cutting into me..
Author notes
Unrequited love prompt; 30 words or fewer.
A contest entry
- Unrequited love by Lavender Butterfly.
460 points, ended March 17, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Deeply gripping and immensely powerful... Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.
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Well done!
Yes, I like this! Powerful imagery. Best of luck in the contest.
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