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Unrequited



I gathered stars from nights of blue moons,
laying silver carpets for you.

You trampled them, walking past me;
I roll in your dust, shreds cutting into me..

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Unrequited love prompt; 30 words or fewer.

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  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    Deeply gripping and immensely powerful... Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.

  • BellaD
    March 17, 2008
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    Well done!

    Yes, I like this! Powerful imagery. Best of luck in the contest.