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Darkness Devouring Lantern Galaxies

Visions obscured between light and dark
surrealistic crystal prisms of gray embark
turning light into apathetic deflections of the mind
indecisively short of falling into abyss sublime.

Melding mortal indifference with the unknown
leaving eternities incandescent  path shone
empty time's starlight traveled dreams
to galactic stars vacant grays unseen.

Lights coruscate stars distant spinning worlds
galaxy lanterns carried into the black holes

darkness of abyss.





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  • dustookie2
    March 17, 2008

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    Congratulations on the silver....like the way the introduction rolls off the lips...sets up the poem the journey has begun...Has your trademark HH flow imagery rhyme selected words and brilliance of pen.*Rsoe* A pleasure to read.


  • lostangel07
    March 17, 2008
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    Very good An itneresting take on the prompt. Very pelased with this one.