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"Twilight Dancing"

Swirling stars of twinkling light
Shadows that dance in the night
Brilliant colors of iridescent hue,
That speak to the heart within you.

Freedom in these feet that move,
Hips swaying to a tuneless grove.
Jumping and twirling in forever,
These feet that move so clever.

Then, twilight turns from dusk to dawn,
No longer is there dancing on the lawn.
But remembered forever in this memory,
That dances to this forgotten melody.

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  • JoyfulWriter
    March 19, 2008

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    An amazing entry for this contest! Written with beauty shining bright...thanks for entering my contest...good luck...smiles, Terry


  • peridotPixi
    March 17, 2008

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    cute

    i love your choice of background with this poem it fits perfect, i like the first lines they have such detail also your poem has a nice flow and they rhyming seems to work out, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy