she sits in the dark crying
her pain eats away her soul
she wipes her tears the pain makes her feel alive
she is numb it hurts to feel anything but pain
sorrow is her comfort why am i here
what purpose do i serve
she asks over and over again
as she wipes away the tears
Please tell me what you think
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Not great
Not one of your best hun, its a bit all over the place and doesn't emote all too well for me.
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