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Dead...But Never Gone!

Your eyes search for me
But find nothing near
My icy breath lingers
Upon your skin

Lilac mists of me
Surround you
My voice etched
Upon the wind

If you can't have me, no one can?
Well here I am, forever!

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  • Sarah957
    March 18, 2008

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    Muw waaaaa! I like this, one of those be careful what you wish for things. Its so great to see you writing something again!


  • Dalaney gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    lol...i like the spooky effect this has...shivvvvver! thank you so very much for entering my contest. love, lane