Smoke rising from fragmented wood
Choking the breath from those that stood
A part of their town gone for good
Burning, decaying flesh before death could.
A contest entry
- Magic in words #2 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended March 22, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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AMAZINGLY powerful!! Dark and creative...i like this very much!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
pri
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Great tack on the prompt an powerfully written....reminds me of Steven King. Best of luck in the contest.
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