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What Does My Heart Truly Desire


What Does My Heart Truly Desire
Just for you lord, to be set on fire

That I could die for you each day
And for others, give my life away

That my heart would beat for the lost
That I would rescue them, at any cost

For the dying child, my heart would bleed
The starving child, I want to feed

There are so many dying and going to hell
I need to learn to serve you well

To set all selfishness aside
And have your will be in my mind

For if I live for myself today
They'll go to hell, they're on their way

But if I could learn to live for them
Then they'd be with you in the end

Change me lord, hear my cry
Make me useful, so they won't die

When you're looking for someone to care
Let it be me that you could send there

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  • Learning2PaintYou
    November 7, 2008

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    I love the message in this poem. It's so heart-felt. I, myself, am a Christian so I appreciate this entry. Thank you.


  • stavykm gold member
    March 20, 2008

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    Beautiful

    What a beautiful poem. I just loved how you plead with the Lord to help you so spread the good new of his love to those whom suffer and are not saved. Thank you for sharing your love for the Lord with me and good luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • Talking Toni gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!

    A beautiful plea for the Lord to use you for his glory and in serving him by serving others. Thanks for your hearfelt entry and the best of luck in the contest!!!~~Toni~~


  • Kassandra Nyktos
    March 17, 2008
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    applaudzes!

  • Kassandra Nyktos
    March 17, 2008

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    When you're looking for someone to care
    Let it be me that you could send there

    The end had to be my favorite part, it was a lovely write ^^


  • StarEyes
    March 17, 2008

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    Wow!!! What a read this one is!! Powerful words in this one!! I love the rhyme scheme, (which is not my best part of writing ) You do it well!!

    This is one my aunt would love to read, May I share it with her?

    Best of luck in this contest!!!

    • Mom of Blondes
      March 17, 2008
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      Thank you for the kind comments on my poem.

      You are more than welcome to share it with your aunt.

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