How am I going to keep my cool?
Not giving any of my game away?
I've seen you around,
you've seen me too.
I know I have your attention.
Wanting to know what I taste like?
"Sugar."
Come over here baby,
lock onto my gaze,
tell me how you want it.
I promise not to disappoint.
Make a move.
Lets not waste anymore time.
Slide over, get close to me.
Don't worry I'm your sure thing.
Trust.
I'm a kitten dressed in tiger's clothing.
That's right, I'll be real good to you.
Delicious.
Lets feed our desires.
Come on make your move.
Audrey Evans
3/16/2008
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it does sound songish, could be redone with a bit more emphasis on poetic devices, but this was your interpretation and its ok as is
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Thanks for your input and effort to sing song this peice, but to change, The Between You & I., and give it a more, "poetic" would ruin any chances it may have being performed by Missy Elliot. And you probably like that too. Hater.
Audrey Evans
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Wow, intense and kind of subtely raunchy, but all done in good taste. Nice job.
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wooooo! HOT lol like how you tempt the person
lol great one !
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You know, if there were more women such as this, I wonder what we as men would do or think for that matter. I don't see tawdry and whorish, I see desire and a woman who has decided that she knows what she has to offer and a man who can make the proper bid. I see a woman who is not ashamed of her sexuality and desires to be enraptured by one who is entranced by it. Again, I must stand and clap.
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