to be
vulnerable
holding your heart you wait
in hopes that love will recognize
your soul
smiling
drops of nature
rain pouring promises
of life into your tender eyes
delight
sighing
signs of new life
let color bleed no more
this fire that shines out from your sight
sparks love
Comments
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Wonderful chain of cinquains!
They fill each other in such a nice way.
Excellent poem to start my day
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This is brilliant! can't believe you haven't written more, a member since 2004?
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heh thank you! i had many more poems up here but in a creative house cleaning i dumped them all about a year ago. haven;t written much lately but am getting back into the groove again. i appreciate your kind words very much!
thanks again
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