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Happy Birthday My Little One

Happy Birthday my little one
one year ago you came to me
twenty nine hours of labor
yet you came and I lived
and I have seen so much beauty
that I find my life much changed
never a selfish thought anymore
I have too much responsibility
to lose such a precious gift like you
and so my little one
on your first birthday
I give you the tools to learn
and of course
a chocolate cake to play with
and pictures for memory's sake
Happy Birthday my little one
and many more may bless you

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December 3rd, 2003 is my baby boy's birthday! By Juniper Iris dedicated to Luis Angel Flores
Written December 3rd, 2003

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  • memo3
    February 3, 2004
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    awww this is so sweet. I hoped he had a very nice birthday. A child can mot certainly change your life though. You think getting married is for better or worst but from hearing stories from my mom i gotta say having a child is for better and for worst Awsome write and i hope your baby grows up nice and healthy.

    jason


  • juniperiris
    December 16, 2003
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    thank you

    thank you. We had a very great time celebrating his birthday. I dressed this poem on Word and it is now in a scrapbook. Thank you so much ::


  • GlassSlippers
    December 3, 2003
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    very sweet, very tender, and a wonderful first birthday tribute.