I’m scared of walking to school alone
I don’t know my way home
I’m scared of strangers
and all kinds of dangers
I don’t want someone to kidnap me
so I flee
I want to be safe
Author notes
wrote by my son 7 yrs old
"Contest Grammy Awards ~ From Bronze to Gold by Rebekah-Ann, option Children's poetry"
A contest entry
- Kids Of The World Tell Me Your Fears by storiesuntold.
300 points, ended March 19, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Grammy Awards ~ From Bronze to Gold by Rebekah-Ann.
300 points, ended May 2, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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your son nathan is a great writer...I think that he should be proud of all the poems he has done!
I have entered he's contest [ Simpsons]
This poem is great and i think that he should be very happy that he won bronze and i am happy that he is hosting a contest, it is great!
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awwww, this was really so sweet! Wish I could say congrates on this lovely piece in person...
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this is soooooo cute... I commend you for taking this time with your son and teaching him and loving him enough to talk to him and keep him safe awesome!
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So sad that he has these worries so young. Don't know what started this, but I'm sure you will help him cope until he has gained more confidence. Give him a hug for me
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very good! such good writing at such a young age. hope that doesnt end. thanks for sharing.
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Keep this little fellow writing - how wonderful that he can write this at age 7. You must be giving him lots of good advice and tips - great idea to get them interested when they are young.
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Bless his heart
He must not ever be expected towalk alone to school or back at that age .I would be afraid myself today and I am 54 years old .Children needs to know their will be someone there to see they are safe to and from school . Listen to his note he is screaming for help dont let him down . For todays world is filled with sick people out there and he needs you very much .
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awwwww
gosh i remember feeling that way...so scarred of the unknown and I am still occasionally as an adult scared of the unknown lol
It was said the best way, still feeling liek it came from the heart of a child.
Hope you do well in the contest darl
Cindy
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