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Flashpoint Fantasy

wind whipped at her hair

and she smiled, carefree

no worries or danger...yet

 

how could she have known

what dangers lurked

behind the mountain

 

golden embers and clouds of ash

turn to orange columns of heat-

an inferno nightmare

 

trapped on all sides;

moments later...

another voice silenced

 

 

Fire consumes.

Author notes

I keep having nightmares about fire

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  • PerVirtuous
    March 17, 2008
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    Very nice! Three bunnies for you!


    • Faeryn
      March 17, 2008
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      thank you. Why do you call the clappy things bunnies?


  • Amera gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    You amaze me with your fantastic imagery. You have penned image and motion with emotion the captivates the reader. Great work, I love it!

    Love,
    Amera♥

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