Sensations felt of someone watching me sleep,
I move ever so nearer to a deeply darken slumber.
Chasing through my dreams her untimely demise,
From perpetually haunting gaze she gives to me.
Looking back to all the times we two shared,
I wonder why I didn't see it all crystal clear.
Noticing nothing seemed to bother her soul,
From peretually haungting gaze she gave to me.
Waking up is so very hard for myself to do,
I will never see how the future might have been.
Wishing things had been different for her,
From perpetually haughting gaze she left with me.
Author notes
I use option #4 From perpetually haunting gaze
A contest entry
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700 points, ended March 30, 2008, 11 entries
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Great write here my friend. Packed with emotion, best of luck with the contest.
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