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[ Thoughts ]

Thoughts
Emotions
Hard to control
When you want to let go

The cutting makes the numbness
Go away for just a second
The pain you endure
Hiding the pain you can't ignore

The fake smile
Everyone sees
Crumbles down
As you fall on your knees

The tears you hold back
You're afraid to release
At night they soundlessly
Stream down your cheeks

The poems
That were written at 3 am
Now, in the garbage can
Ripped and shred

Tonight
You might lose control
As the pain seeps in
And the tears flow
You stare at the pill bottle
Ready to let go...

Author notes

This sort of just came to me...it's kind of how i felt last year when i had depression...it's sort of dark, but that's how depression felt for me...

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  • oldphotosonlybringt
    March 16, 2008

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    Amazing doll!!!
    i loved each line each word the poem was just great, you put a lot in this poem if you know it or not great work keep it up your very talented!

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