Flesh crawling as I shiver
listening to sounds.
Roaring grumbling; sending
vibes over each shoulder.
Drunk with anticipation
he stalks, never letting
his words dissipate.
Life flashes
before my eyes
he lets go!
Author notes
Prompt: Fear
10 lines
A contest entry
- For Women Only by Dalaney.
600 points, ended March 17, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great take Gmomma
good luck, and keep penning beauty.
Lady
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i understand this. i do. thank you very much for taking the prompt and giving it life on the page. The fear is felt. Love, Lane
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ughhuh you know your stuff good luck xx
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I'm not exactly sure whats happening in this, whats going on. To be honest it dosen't make a lot of sence to me. It's supposed to be abstract, but this moves into confusing. Prehaps add a few words?
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