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Swords of Words

The swords of our tongs have become sharpened by pain
You are the cold stone for my blades edge to be worked

You have helped shape my words into cutting blades
That we have used to reap wounds on each other

Why should I be sorry for giving you back pain you inflict?
Yet I take blame from you because you don't care what you say

Your lack of empathy shows me how little you care
When you start swinging your words to cut through my heart

To sever every string of life within my being
To open old wounds never to let me heal

Author notes

Is it not interesting how the words "Sword and Words" are so close to being the same? I find for myself that it is not a coincindence.

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  • Eternal-Dreamer
    March 19, 2008

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    wow i like your work, this is very thought provokeing and very well writen, i saw you commented on my ap sisters poem and thought i would come and have a look you have a wonderful way with words and i like your flow,