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The Fullness of Emptiness

Even though I feel empty

this Emptiness
embraces me
like an unfulfilled Lover:

stroking me
with His sacred sorrow

(I understand)

nagging me
with His neglected needs

(I understand)

decorating me
with His desolated dreams

(I understand)

Talk to me

from your fullness,
Emptiness!

(I am listening)

Fill my lonely hours
with your longing -

I'll fill you
with my Being

myra

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Written February 10th, 2002

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  • myrataal silver member
    April 13, 2002
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    Thank you Wisps ... I have almost forgotten this one ...


  • April 13, 2002
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    It's a very beautiful poem.


  • myrataal silver member
    February 10, 2002
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    Thanks Gecko & Andy ... your words are pure inspiration.
    Edited by myrataal on Apr 13 because 'submission incomplete'.


  • Einstein on Crack
    February 10, 2002
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    i live this .... It says so much ... so simply .... great presentation ///// Andy


  • gecko
    February 10, 2002
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    this is a beautiful piece Myra. a couple of typos within but the general conception is dazzleing. ah that bid for the ever shoulder on which to rest out weery heads. Thankyou

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