Fragrance of strong emotion lingers,
Eternal hell brought forth by haters.
Actions by others creating harm to you
Releasing hatred in various forms, we run.
Victim screams before the light of day,
As the morning shadows claim their soul.
Race against time, as another addict runs,
Increasing adrenaline as the drug lord discovers
Earned funds, now disappears before his nose.
Skeptical spouse, abusive demeanor, running scared.
Author notes
I want no more than ten lines
free verse
Your Prompt:
Fear
Thanks Lane hon, Making me think LOL...shame shame.
A contest entry
- For Women Only by Dalaney.
600 points, ended March 17, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I knew you would give me an excellent entry
thank you so much for your time and your talent. Love, Lane
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great write, good luck
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Full of punch!
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I know fear very well. I have writtren several pieces on it but none are ten lines long. Good luck to you in the contest.
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