Fear
Hatred
Love
Longing
All is part of us
All in us
Forever
We fear the dark
The light
The wind
The water
The world
I ask why
We fear
We hate
We love
We do because
It is we
as one
we would be lost
without it all
Fear
Hatred
Love
Longing
A contest entry
- For Women Only by Dalaney.
600 points, ended March 17, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i was looking for ten lines of poetry....this is a good entry, however. thank you very much for writing. love, lane
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i love it
We fear the dark
The light
The wind
The water
The world
I put this up because of the other comment, I understand that some ppl can see the light as a blessing and the water as cleansing but not everyone can look at it like that. Once you have been in the dark for so long you become afraid of the light. Or you think that water is here to consume rather than cleanse you. Anyway you can look at this in many different ways which is a great thing about this piece. Keep up the good work and good luck.
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We fear the dark
The light
The wind
The water
The world
I guess some people fear these things I cant imagine fearing the light, light leadds us the way we need to spiritually if we open ourselves to it, the wind, i look at as bringing me blessings, in the wind blows to bring in the good and when the wind blows hard releasing the bad...the water cleanses, to me representing a spirtual bath...And well the world...yes i can see the fear there...
ahhh what you made me think about. Thanks for making me see thing i long forgotten.
Good luck to you.
love
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