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Raven And Man

Raven speaks loudly
Nestled low between the souls
What is it you want?

Author notes

"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 7, 2008
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    Superb imagery, a beautifully penned Haiku. A delight to read

  • InBetweenThoughts
    March 21, 2008

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    Thank you so much for your Haiku I appreciate your entry... All counts are good, good form,and authors notes, thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT