(for Thor, who carries the End of the World
in his name)
I cannot dissociate me
from Thor:
His distant discussion
splits my emotion
like the wonder
of atomic fission
With every peal of Thunder
I see my innermost secrets
bared before the Heavens:
Why do I try
to lit my warm ray
at his Fire of Ice?
The answer is written
by the Holy Promise:
The end of this World
will not come by Water
but by the Flash
of Fire ...
Oh Thunder!
do not forget that Sun
also awaits combustion
Do honour to my prenatal
desire:
Let me enlight the Waters
of this Earth
whilst you inflame
the Universe!
myra
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Written February 10th, 2002
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Pai
You'd think that, with the gods and stuff talking, anything nuclear wouldn't come up. It's actually an interesting turn when you...juxtapose...the two, and certainly a much-needed and appreciated one. -
Thank you Joe ... for leading me back to my own poem ...LOL and here I discover now that I have not noticed Yolanda's comment ...!
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neutral
I am feelin a bit well not withit again, I thought I had a grasp then andrew confused me in the comments, I liked the imagery, I kinda was thinkin it was the end times, but I am lost now, still the romantic and beautiful imagery, you are addictive, beautiful no matter whether you fully comprehend or not,
joe -
Man and the universe. Kinda scarey and an awesomeness
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:) nothin' to forgive, simple an' stupid man!
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forgive this simple and stupid man Myra, It's Sunday ... brain takes a holiday ..... LOL ... Andy
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I mean ... with such a title (LOL)!
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whew ... what a relief, Andy ... *SMILES* ... can't live without your understanding LOL.
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I think I have got it ...... it's good in fact it is very good .... Andy
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Ra (Sun) addressing Thor (Thunder) ... veil lifted? *angelic smile*
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Also having trouble with this one, there is a veiled message in here for someone ....... Andy
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*innocent smile* (did i wrote that?) LOL
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am trying sesperately to read between these lines but i fear that it will take me a few tries. appologies for my ineptude.
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