So far away, yet so close
I love you more then you'll ever know
Words cant express the love that i feel
For once i know that it's actually real
Never in my life have i felt so alive
'Cause now i actually have the will to survive
I'll always be here, for whatever you need
Even if only to show you, that you mean the world to me
Author notes
this is another one i wrote for my girlfriend
A contest entry
- "Can I Keep You Forever" by oldphotosonlybringt.
550 points, ended March 20, 2008, 13 entries
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Bronze trophy winner
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Judged-ola!
This is really simple, yet deep. I really like this. I've been through that before. -
Simple yet it brings across so much emotion
I love it
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this was very beautiful...so short, yet so meaningful...good luck in the contest
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this is very short but it was full of emotion! good luck on my contest!♥♥♥
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how very sweet, this reminds me of me and my love, thanks for entering
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Wow... This was a really great write. I can feel what you are saying in this. Congrats on finding someone that special to you. I loved the whole thing. Great job.
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Very good...this captures a great amount of emition to be as short as it is...This is wonderful...I liked it alot!
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Awww... that is so cute and sweet. My biggest complaint is that you did not capitalize your I's, I found it to be distracting. Good luck and thanks for entering my contest!
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A good poem, but full of spelling mistakes which spoil the effect. The author should have been more careful.
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Very cute. Short and sweet. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck,
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First of all congrats on the bronze it was well deserved. Second this reminds me so much of what I usually write in school about my boyfriend. It is filled with wonderful emotions that just leap into your mind.
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I like this you did a wonderful job writing this. congrats on your bronze trophy! Good luck in the open contests. Keep up your wonderful work!
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awwwwww, i liked the rhyme scheme, and it was so sweet!
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so sweet and toutching ... ... thanx and best wishes ... ...
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those feelins are powerful in this poems
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a very nice poem leyla...i like the feelings in it...a lot of feelings actually in the poem itself....
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That is gorgous...She is the luckiest of girls. Wow, that is wonderful. You seek out every emotion everlasting in love and you bring it to the light so well. Hope that you let her read this, she will be awwed by it, just as am i.
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aw.!
i wanted to cry..
Amazing poem doll, keep it up
i loved it, hope your girl loves it as well, thanks for entering..
endless -
this is really, really good. congrats on finding someone you love that much.
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Beautifuly expressed! I'm soooo happy for you!
Congrats again!
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