Swooned by your beauty, seen up close
Grateful introduction, by host
Memories afar, mind has set
If this was the day, we first met
Locks of cocoa, smooth skin of love
Lips so full, that’s all I dream of
This lively charm, is what you get
If this was the day, we first met
This day is not, what started love
These decades past, we pushed and shoved
You’ve held my heart within your debt
If this was the day, we first met
Remember me, your one true love
For I’ve returned, from skies above
Sharing life, this constant duet
If this was the day, we first met
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Your poem hits hard i like this one alot keep up the good work
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Masterpiece of Emotions
This is wonderful account of love. I see a man renewing his hope. I see a man longing for what he had. You know just how to word the affairs of the heart perfectly.
"Remember me, your one true love
For I’ve returned, from skies above
Sharing life, this constant duet
If this was the day, we first met"
Now you could of just flew in, or maybe you're an angel...but nevertheless you are wishing for love..
You are one of the most dynamic & talented poets.
Glad you are my AP son.....a proud Momma....
Ma
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Beautiful
This is a very beautiful poem from start to finish, this poem many can relate to, I think that we have all been in love at one time or another, even if you do nto realize what it is, excellent write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Hey! Just wanted to add that I thought this was well done as also. I actually enjoyed the 1st stanza the most. Keep Writing!
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Thank U Ms. Mahogany - this was one that had to be redone again.
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Sensual and profound.
I am really feeling the senualality in the imagery and metaphors. The rhyme and flow was well played, and i thought this stanza was great
"Remember me, your one true love
For I’ve returned, from skies above
Sharing life, this constant duet
If this was the day, we first met"
well done, good to see some new writes from you again, had me worried for a minute
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Bro - I am Str8 grinding. I 'm trying to get folks hired and get them sum benefits, so I've been working 6 days a week to help us out. Sh*t is gettin hectic out here. I'll try to get around to see u my friend. Up late trying to clear my head. Thanks!!
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Yes, Michael, this is very
Sensual indeed. Glad to see you write something, and this was a great start back.
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Thanks Coco C. came to me weeks ago but one stanza was weak. Finally had a chance to finish it.
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