Small and bright
She shines but wants to fad
Lost and scared
Choices yet to be made
Lust and love
Death and lost
Gorgeous and broken
Young and free
Like a star she is just waiting to fall!
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Wow, this is very imagery. I love it, as one has said, "throw it at the moon". You shine so bright hon, and things will come out all right. Just another twist and turn along the pathway.
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Puts a whole new meaning to "Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket." More like, "Catch this falling star and keep her in your prayers." Great write. I love it!
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a good piece of poetry - fad? a sad sense of loss here, of longing for life and love to come swirling.
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This is a beautifully sad poem. Good work.
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very good poem
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Wow this is beautiful, I really love the ending, great job on this poem
♥ meg
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