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Seting myself free


Its pretty funny the way you lie and don’t even see
The way you say when your with her you think of me
Boy don’t you see what your doing with my heart is unfair
don’t you understand what your doing I just cant bare

You tell me you love me and its to hard to say goodbye
Funny though when I am the one left to cry
So take your lies and leave me don’t you ever call again
Your nothing baby not anymore, so walk out the door

Tell me im trash say ill be nothing, scream and yell at me
Darling just you wait and see ill be everything and more
Doll im better than you cant you see, I have a dream
But in it your not with me, oh so sorry sweetie…

You call me up and say how you need to see me today
How you miss me and care boy what your doing isn’t fair
You know ill fall right back into your arms
You know I cant say no, when you look me in the eyes

Its pretty funny the way you lie and don’t even see
The way you say when your with her you think of me
Boy don’t you see what your doing with my heart is unfair
don’t you understand what your doing I just cant bare

So leave me just let me be please I beg of you baby
I cant do this anymore its getting heavy I need to let go
This we both know, so kiss me and say goodbye
Im on my way though I might cry it’s the best thing you see

You tell me you love me and its to hard to say goodbye
Funny though when I am the one left to cry
So take your lies and leave me don’t you ever call again
Your nothing baby not anymore, so walk out the door


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Comments


  • c e ll a r . d oo r
    March 17, 2008

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    this is definately my favorite of your so far, you seem to be growing and expressing yourself much better in your poetry :]


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    March 16, 2008

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    Sad & Beautiful!!!

    Very heartfelt, vunerable & honest...
    Almost like the moment of epiphany has come & you rationalise what you're doing...
    Well penned, well said, well done!!!